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Wednesday 6 May 2020

missing boy

6 comments:

  1. Dear Devlin,
    I like the way you used Louie and were describing him as he is. I was going to write down it was funny reading AND IT IS yet I just can't put my finger on it. Anyways, in my one I didn't use a member of our class and that got me thinking; if you were to do one of your self how would you describe your self?
    Sincerely Dr. Joshua D. B.

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  2. hi Deviln
    i like how you put the number to call if someone has seen him plus how you described him and how you said he was standing by a bush very funny question would,ve done anyone else?

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  3. thanks billy i would have done anyone louie was just the first person i found why do you whant me to do you billy.

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  4. hi dev i like your miss boy post it is cool

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  5. Hey Dev I like your missing boy post it is very funny what I noticed was you put in call this number if seen him that is very smart also you just got to make it sound sense mabye you could have put a reward to who ever finds him but awesome.I like how you used Louie as the missing boy it is very cleaver idea.

    Where is louie,like what bush is he standing in front ????

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