I am a Year 8 student at Kaingaroa School in Northland, NZ. I am in Huia Whānau and my teacher is Miss Fleet.
I think this is excellent Devlin! I can picture exactly what you're saying, good use of vocabulary and poetry features.
Thank you miss
Hi Devlin, awesome writing maybe next time add more punctuation in your writing plus some great descriptive words to make your writing even better. But I loved your poem. ;)
thank you Declan I really appreciate it
I think this is excellent Devlin! I can picture exactly what you're saying, good use of vocabulary and poetry features.
ReplyDeleteThank you miss
DeleteHi Devlin, awesome writing maybe next time add more punctuation in your writing plus some great descriptive words to make your writing even better. But I loved your poem. ;)
ReplyDeletethank you Declan I really appreciate it
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