please answer my question

my question

my favourite maui slide

This week we only did one paragraph and this is my narrative about Maui I feel pretty good. And I'v learnt how to take a screen shot     

may red ball

disciptive writting

Big yellow machines with jet black squares on the

top and big arms in the front. And all the wires  

everywhere. Big bright lights on the top of most

Machines.And all the hydraulics with all the bolts

And all the little poor animals.

They probably feel sad because the humans are

Destroying there home.I’m sad because

That once was there beautiful home now look at it.

my narrative w8

MY comic w8

all about me

week two- dragon world

Do you like dragons? well this is
the story for you. Once upon a time there were three dragons
enjoying there evening flyet in the beautiful red sky.
When the sky went black and they looked up to a  humongous
star destroyer but little did they know that Darth Vader was in
the driver's seat.then the star destroyer started shooting there
home bang! bang! so the dragons started to get angry so they
fought with all there might and they fought for hours and hours.

Then the chief dragon saw Darth Vader they new each other
from in the past when Darth Vader tried to take over sometimes
he has flashbacks of all his men dieing . so he spread his wings
and flue down with all his might then he took a big breath of air
and then it came out as fire And it all rained  down on darth
vade'r.But somehow somewhere he came out like nothing
happened so then they fought for hours and hours until the chief
of the dragons got him down and stuck his five meter claw right
through Darth vader's head and then all of Darth Vader's men
stood down and all got back in there star destroyer and never
returned and the dragons lived happily ever after...   

Te reo slide and narrative slide

Do you like dragons? well this is the story for you. Once upon a time there were three dragons enjoying there evening flying in the beautiful red sky. When the sky went black and they looked up to a  humongous star destroyer but little did they know that Darth Vader was in the driver's seat.then sudenly the star destroyer started shooting there home bang! bang! so the dragons started to get angry so they fought with all there might and they fought for hours and hours.

Then the chief dragon saw Darth Vader they new each other from in the past when Darth Vader tried to take over sometimes he has flashbacks of all his men dieing . so he spread his wings and flue down with all his might then he took a big breath of air and then it came out as fire And it all rained  down on Darth Vader. But somehow somewhere he came out like nothing happened so then they fought for hours and hours until the chief of the dragons got him down and stuck his five meter claw right through Darth vaders head and then all of Darth vaders men stood down and all got back in there star destroyer and never returned and the dragons lived happily ever after...